星期二, 5月 30, 2006

「出土」詩作

日山方吐白
匆匆入黃昏
當年一紙誓
只怕未完婚

嘩,勁野呀!! 方才,我的一位大學同學執「快勞」,竟然發現呢首「出土」詩作。話說係上dr kwong既詩選堂而創作的,宜家睇番,真係得啖笑。

而我朋友的詩就是︰

夏夜執書卷
蟬聲四處鳴
星宿隨左右
俯首至天明

好明顯,佢係一個好學生,我係...

4 則留言:

Ming ^^ 說...

Oh? how come... It sounds really familiar! Did u post it somewhere else or what?

Anonymous 說...

新意欠奉

ming ^^ 說...

Well, I'd say it's pretty ok, as that seems to be one of his first few trials.

匿名 說...

阿祖的書就快出了,希望你會支持他們呵!

《當萊斯遇上阿祖‧台上台下梁祖堯》

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