星期二, 5月 30, 2006

「出土」詩作

日山方吐白
匆匆入黃昏
當年一紙誓
只怕未完婚

嘩,勁野呀!! 方才,我的一位大學同學執「快勞」,竟然發現呢首「出土」詩作。話說係上dr kwong既詩選堂而創作的,宜家睇番,真係得啖笑。

而我朋友的詩就是︰

夏夜執書卷
蟬聲四處鳴
星宿隨左右
俯首至天明

好明顯,佢係一個好學生,我係...

4 則留言:

匿名 說...

Oh? how come... It sounds really familiar! Did u post it somewhere else or what?

匿名 說...

新意欠奉

匿名 說...

Well, I'd say it's pretty ok, as that seems to be one of his first few trials.

匿名 說...

阿祖的書就快出了,希望你會支持他們呵!

《當萊斯遇上阿祖‧台上台下梁祖堯》

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