星期日, 9月 10, 2006



門檻掃新漆

青苔卻依舊

半生樓台過

兩鬢自斑白

窗外風聲細雨漸

明日還有幾多愁

昔日傘聚難再撐

淚未乾時

雨自下

7 則留言:

Anonymous 說...

Ohmy god, this painting is terrible depressing with the describing words...

Well, my heart is so heavy now...

Yo, move forward 說...

yeah...
good to hear your heart is heavy hoho.
so that my words do work here!!

ming 說...

I'm always amazed how you can write like a man in his 50s!

lol

Anyhow, it's a brilliant work.

DID YOU REALLY WRITE THIS???

Yo, move forward 說...

50's?????????????????????

ming 說...

Isn't it?

「半生樓台過」
「昔日傘聚難再撐」

So much like someone who has experienced half a century of hardship and separations.

What are you up to these days, huh?

monkey_yee 說...

喂,詩人,唔見你一排,好miss囉,~~
沙灘計劃失敗之後,陳綺貞之前,要見下啦~~

小桃 說...

詩中有畫......


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